The strongest images are probably the first two. Compositionally they're stronger and also more interesting because you can see the open mailbox and you wonder what the subject is doing. The weakest image is the sixth. The composition is weak and it lacks subject interest.
Images 3 and 7 look the most natural so in that they are the strongest images however There is something about this model that is making the images much less successful then they could be. You can tell they are uncomfortable in the image. The 7th images also has the most public of a background in comparison to the foliage in most of the others and that too makes it more successful as an image of a naked person in a public place. I don't think the mailboxes alone support that concept.
1,2,4,5 and 8 are the strongest in my opinion here. I'm distracted by the other objects in the other pictures. The subject seemed more comfortable in these as well. Image 7 works pretty well though b/c as stated above it does show more of the "public."
The strongest images to me are two, five, and the second to last one. I don't like how you've cut his head off in some pictures because it makes me feel like he's cramped by the confines of the image. I really like the way this blog is going. The color scheme of this week's are working for me as well as the concept of him checking the mail. Your blog and ideas are really good!
The strongest images are probably the first two. Compositionally they're stronger and also more interesting because you can see the open mailbox and you wonder what the subject is doing. The weakest image is the sixth. The composition is weak and it lacks subject interest.
ReplyDeleteImages 3 and 7 look the most natural so in that they are the strongest images however There is something about this model that is making the images much less successful then they could be. You can tell they are uncomfortable in the image.
ReplyDeleteThe 7th images also has the most public of a background in comparison to the foliage in most of the others and that too makes it more successful as an image of a naked person in a public place. I don't think the mailboxes alone support that concept.
1,2,4,5 and 8 are the strongest in my opinion here. I'm distracted by the other objects in the other pictures. The subject seemed more comfortable in these as well. Image 7 works pretty well though b/c as stated above it does show more of the "public."
ReplyDeleteThe strongest images to me are two, five, and the second to last one. I don't like how you've cut his head off in some pictures because it makes me feel like he's cramped by the confines of the image. I really like the way this blog is going. The color scheme of this week's are working for me as well as the concept of him checking the mail. Your blog and ideas are really good!
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